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    Post Love : My perception....

    There is no definition for Love……just perceptions……which varies from person to person……this is mine.

    Wanted to write this for a long time……now its done……its very close to my heart……might not fit into “poetry” in one way or the other…but even then its here

    If you ask me
    Do I like to be with you?
    I would say
    'Yes, I do'
    But can’t die for you
    Can promise you rather
    That I would struggle to live
    Even if I’m dying
    Just to be with you
    No matter how painful it might be

    If you ask me
    Do I care for you?
    I would say
    'Yes, I do'
    But can’t promise you
    That I would stand by you forever
    Rather…can assure you that
    I would be right behind you
    When no-one would dare to

    If you ask me
    Do I love you?
    I would say
    'Yes, I do'
    But can’t promise you
    That it would remain the same forever
    Rather….can assure you
    That I would Love you the most
    When you would deserve it least

    If you ask me
    How much I love you?
    I would say
    'My Love for you
    Equals the number of seconds
    This earth has lived'
    Can’t promise that
    It would remain the same forever
    Rather….can assure you
    That it would keep on increasing
    Even if you are the worst person on this earth.

    Para-1: I think dying is easy, its pain just once…its life which is difficult every minute……& struggling to live when you are dying is like fighting against all odds……

    Para-2: This means being with that someone……when the world is not willing to help…… because when everything is going hunky dory he won't even ask for help ....Loving is being there when the going gets tough....without making him ask for your presence.

    Para-3: Last two lines are taken from a saying ‘Love me the most, when I deserve it the least; because that’s the time when I need it most’ ……… self explanatory

    Para-4: Love for someone cannot be measured, Loving someone is just loving……without looking at anything else……not even the worst things ……

    We would get thousand reasons to hate someone, but in this world which is already full of hatred……people are killing each other for nothing……we need to find one thing in a person to Love……you get what you look for, so why not look for something good???

    As they say: “no-one has injured his eye-sight by looking at the brighter side“.

    Rest up to you..........
    Thanks for reading

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    a-w-e-s-o-m-e!!!
    beautiful thought!!!
    its very hard to capture love in words like that!!!

    even i though about love one day...
    n i came with this...

    defination of love: its the only thing in this world which can not be defined..
    नमो सुरस्वयंसिद्धा, नमो नादस्वरुपीणि I
    नमो ब्रम्हांडध्वनिर्मयी, नमो तस्यै नमो नमः II
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    Nice one yaar. ummm.. i dun hv much idea of love n confused but yes i do care a loads for whom i like.
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    Share your Affection, Voice your Feelings, Leave your Mark......

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    yaaa..nice poem...hmm..am i into somethin here???? and ya ..love all........
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    Love is unexplainable..
    or in simple words..
    the definitions vary from Person to person...
    depending on the Circumstances

    Each para you've written
    can summarise a whole Lifetime spent with a person..
    a person needs Love, Care, Attention and as a Companion in different stages of life...
    or all of them sometimes...
    Defining Love according to these stages would be playing a particular role at a given stage to the best..

    Do I like to be with you?
    Do I care for you?
    Do I love you?
    How much I love you?

    are two-edged questions..
    they can be asked to oneself or the other person..

    I liked the poem dear
    it couldnt be any better..
    sounds lyrical.. struck the right chords
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    Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
    Where life and its ventures are laid,
    The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
    May see us in sunshine or shade;
    Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
    We'll trim our broad sail as before,
    And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
    Nor ask how we look from the shore!

    Oliver Wendell Holmes

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    Hi Garima. I wanted to say, that the definition of true love is pretty much wot u've written. atleast, nowadays.And yes, Gr8 work.
    Ruk Kyun Gaye? Bajaao!

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    @ Nimisha thanks alot....& totally agree with ur finding
    @Sachin....try to avoid confusion in Love..
    @Abhi....thanks for reading....u kno wat..now m used to ur funny replies
    @Martina...tht was a thesis frm ur end...he he....thanks alot buddy

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    Quote Originally Posted by koolstrum
    Hi Garima. I wanted to say, that the definition of true love is pretty much wot u've written. atleast, nowadays.And yes, Gr8 work.
    Thanks alot.....

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    Quote Originally Posted by nimisha
    defination of love: its the only thing in this world which can not be defined..
    Hmm... I completely disagree with that.
    " Now therefore kill every male among the little ones, and kill every woman who has known man by lying with him.

    But all the girls, who have not known man by lying with him, keep alive for yourselves. "- Book Of Numbers 31:17-18

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    Quote Originally Posted by shsnawada
    Hmm... I completely disagree with that.
    hope to see your defination soon....

    rohit

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    I completely agree with shsnawada.

    definition of love is Pain,pleasure,sorrow,grief,excitement,and many more emotions that set us apart from the animals.


    Quote Originally Posted by shsnawada
    Hmm... I completely disagree with that.
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    @Suhas...Pamposh...m sure wat she meant there is that Love is one thng that can not be defined in "......." ( in quotes)...we have studied in schools & colleges...& we agree that wat evr is defined with in those quotes is 'universally' accepted.....but Love is one thng that wud have different meaning to different people.....thats y it cannot b defined...we can just feel it & explain it in our own words...
    & y r we getting into an arguement here??? that wether Love can b defined or not...?? guess none of u criticised wat i wrote....

    PS...we can hv another thead...discussing wether Love can be defined...anyone of u can start that thread.....

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    Quote Originally Posted by astroguru26
    hope to see your defination soon....

    rohit
    missing ur comments here....

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    GREAT ONE GARIMA...
    Its really difficult to express LOVE in words.But you have made it so simple yet so definitive, informative, expressive and touching as well.
    Really, Hats off...!!



    Quote Originally Posted by walk_alone
    I completely agree with shsnawada.

    definition of love is Pain,pleasure,sorrow,grief,excitement,and many more emotions that set us apart from the animals.
    Buddy, no wonder you are walkin alone...Take time and Think.Life is beautiful, and it can be when love is around. Not necessarily of the girl who loves you(LOVER) but that can be even from us. So dont express it as pain.I hurted.

    Nimi..Love is defined when Life came into being.
    And though we know what it is...had no theory till Garima came up with this.
    "Positive pictures come from negatives developed in the dark.So if you ever find yourself in the dark understand that God is working on a very beautiful picture."
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sharmontime
    GREAT ONE GARIMA...
    Its really difficult to express LOVE in words.But you have made it so simple yet so definitive, informative, expressive and touching as well.
    Really, Hats off...!!

    Nimi..Love is defined when Life came into being.
    And though we know what it is...had no theory till Garima came up with this.
    u left me speechless....thanx so much....
    & yeah....i love ur avyy...its Shaan rite??

 

 
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