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    rockboyteek is offline Beginner
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    hey this is a poem i did in my english lesson, it was work so it aint that good

    The stormy winds hitting you aggresively.
    The unpleasent pain of an empty heart.
    The heavy chain keeping you still,
    leaving you in distress and pain.
    The bitter taste left on your lips.
    The same picture infront of your eyes.
    The hurting sound of empty space,
    making you notice there's no one around.
    The beautiful smell
    that no longer lasted.
    My hurting hearted can no long take,
    the love she gave was always fake.

    so hope u like it anyway
    Live every day to the fullest...... you never know 'Kal Ho Na Ho'

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    browneyegurlie is offline Sweet as Honey
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    bro this ones ace keep it up
    everything about you is so easy to love,
    i've been watching from above

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    It's a nice poem dude. Keep posting more poems.
    "Come to the edge," he said.

    They said, "We are afraid."

    "Come to the edge," he said.

    They came, he pushed them....

    and they flew.............

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    Subhro is offline Argentina lost :"(
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    tht rockd rockyboy.. reps 4 ya
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