Hey Ronnie thats a nice poem!!
i like the stanza
"Innocence built Sand Castles of Love
Built to be destroyed
By the Winds of Time"
i think it'l sound nice if you make a song out of it..
you arent bad by the way
Pssst....start making the leave letters more interesting by adding your poetic talent to it..
Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
Where life and its ventures are laid,
The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
May see us in sunshine or shade;
Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
We'll trim our broad sail as before,
And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
Nor ask how we look from the shore!
Oliver Wendell Holmes