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    Lost Innocence

    Okay. First time I am gonna post here. I cannot write anything, not even a good leave letter. I scribbled a few in my school days and college days. Forgive the follies of my youth . This one's called Lost Innocence.

    Lost Innocence

    Wings of desire embare me
    Shadows Of Ignorance
    I can feel upon me
    Bright Light Shines
    But Ignorance Blinds

    Caught In the clutches
    Innocence built Sand Castles of Love
    Built to be destroyed
    By the Winds of Time

    That innocence Lost
    Lost Forever
    I'm the one that has to die when it's time for me to die, so let me live my life, the way I want to. - Hendrix
    If you can remember the '60s, then you weren't there. - Unknown
    I'm shopping around for something to do that no one will like. - Jerry Garcia
    Don't compromise yourself. You are all you've got. - Janis Joplin
    On stage I make love to twenty five thousand people; and then I go home alone. - Janis Joplin

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    hey.. leave letters, even i cant write

    But ur poem aint bad! in fact, it's good.....

    Quote Originally Posted by ronnieanand
    Bright Light Shines
    But Ignorance Blinds
    Good one..

    do post more...

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    its short n precise dude....good work!

    but it still making me laugh somewhere

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    better off writing leave letters n resignation letters

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    -Other side of the Horizon- you wouldnt wanna be there..
    Hey Ronnie thats a nice poem!!
    i like the stanza

    "Innocence built Sand Castles of Love
    Built to be destroyed
    By the Winds of Time"

    i think it'l sound nice if you make a song out of it..
    you arent bad by the way

    Pssst....start making the leave letters more interesting by adding your poetic talent to it..

    Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
    Where life and its ventures are laid,
    The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
    May see us in sunshine or shade;
    Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
    We'll trim our broad sail as before,
    And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
    Nor ask how we look from the shore!

    Oliver Wendell Holmes





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