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Thread: Losing Myself

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    ~Bish is offline The Illusionist
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    Thumbs up Losing Myself

    Hi All,

    Looks are deceptive
    Life is just a perspective
    Slowly dies in one corner
    *******! who is this souls owner

    The pain that grows within
    the incapability to rest in
    tremors of illusion
    wake him up in the nights

    trying hard to resist
    giving up evrything to persist
    He is strong enough to hold it
    but weak enough to reveal it

    Thinking about the angel
    which will make his soul heal
    Lost is one soul
    Lost is the feel

    Like a tired soldier
    gives up the weapons
    Shouts at the dark night
    Kill me before they kill me

    Hatred is the only thing
    he can offer anyone
    Destruction is the only action
    he can perform all alone

    Don't come near him
    He may bite
    Don't wake him up
    He may fight

    Dies a soul.. slowly slowly
    Can see him drowning in the
    ocean of love..


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    oye great effort yaar !

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    i can understand the feel.. hang on sweetheart!
    नमो सुरस्वयंसिद्धा, नमो नादस्वरुपीणि I
    नमो ब्रम्हांडध्वनिर्मयी, नमो तस्यै नमो नमः II
    ----------- निमिषा-----------------

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    u r pretty good at poetry man... and dont worry! just take care.... *smiles*
    .: is it just |\/|E ... or is it the \/\/0rLD? :.

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    It is a beautiful Poem, indeed

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    Maturity reflects… keep writing…this was a good one…
    Keep Guessing....... ;o)

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    fairandlovely is offline peeka-boo
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    in castles in the air
    Nice. It tends to drag a little at places but ends beautifully. Are you making a song out of it?



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