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    Wink khula aakash

    hi evrybody.... ny name is aakash..... i have written this poem for my love..... kyunki maine use apna nam diya hai..... maine is poem ko apna naam diya...... please reply..... i need ur love and support..... love ya all.....

    \check out my music if you want to here......

    here is the poem:


    Dard lunga apne pe tere liye
    Dil se dua nikalti hai tere liye
    Is dard ko mehsus karke to dekh
    Saara Aakash hai tere liye

    Zinda hun yahaan pe tere liye
    Saans leta hun yahaan pe tere liye
    Pankh apne faila ke to dekh zaraa
    Khula Aakash hun main tere liye

    Lamha lamha tarasta hun tere liye
    Tanhayee main akela rota hun tere liye
    Ek baar ud ke to dekh aasman main
    Khula Aakash hun tere liye

    Saare faasle mit jayenge tere liye
    Sari duriya kam ho jayengi tere liye
    Bas ek baar , ek baar ud ke to dekh
    Khula Aakash hun main tere liye

    Shafali kucch aisa kar dunga tere liye
    Ki duniya chahegi muze sirf tere liye
    Apni nazrein upar utha ke to dekh zaraa
    Saara Aakash saamne hai tere liye

    Main yaahaan hun tere liye
    Zindagi se mohhabat karta hun tere liye
    Pankh faila ke dekh to zaraa apne
    Khula AAKASH hun main tere liye

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    ^Wonderfully beautiful poem, touched my heart. Good effort.
    "While the truncheon may be used in lieu of conversation, words will always retain their power. Words offer the means to meaning, and for those who will listen, the enunciation of truth."

    robotpajamas: since Im going to be giving the CAT this year
    d_ist_urb_ed: To whom?
    robotpajamas: Taking
    robotpajamas: f*ck you
    d_ist_urb_ed: =))

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    tere liye...good effort....thoda repetation se bachoo dost...monotony kills intrust...u wanted comments hai na ??

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    as a poem.. nice efforts...

    as a song... great job..
    नमो सुरस्वयंसिद्धा, नमो नादस्वरुपीणि I
    नमो ब्रम्हांडध्वनिर्मयी, नमो तस्यै नमो नमः II
    ----------- निमिषा-----------------

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    sachoo is offline drenched in my pain again
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    Tuzhe kis kis ka love aur support chahiye. Shafali ko batana he padega

    anyways reps.. u agreed to me..


    Respect the Elders, Teach the Young, Cooperate with the Family and friends,

    Play when you can, Work when you should, Rest in between,

    Share your Affection, Voice your Feelings, Leave your Mark......

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    good one dude!!!
    "Positive pictures come from negatives developed in the dark.So if you ever find yourself in the dark understand that God is working on a very beautiful picture."
    let live and live.
    knowledge for thyself is not wisdom, sharing it is.
    you backstab and you die.
    never say die and never lie.
    before you say,"I can't", say, "I'll try."
    one who thinks of doing it in one of the days, does it in none of them



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