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    madhuresh's Avatar
    madhuresh is offline madhuresh
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    keep punching

    These empty transparent feelings
    misty and unheard
    fill nothing and keep the whole place
    dirty and weired
    most of these form a thin layer
    covers every thing to feel it
    my heart is a punching bag now
    every night i punch and clean it...

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    i'm_not_neo is offline el valor máximo absoluto
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    uhmm..the gist is fairly obvious,though I dunno if there's more to it than what appears superficially...the metaphor was creative,I mean the heart as a punching bag but yeah,I seems totally incomplete and've written better
    "I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."

    "So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
    And only God knows why..."

    Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock

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    fairandlovely is offline peeka-boo
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    in castles in the air
    There seems to be some kind of melancholic humour underlying in the poem like you're somehow sharing a joke which nobody but you will understand or maybe you're laughing at yourself?

    I didnt understand what this was all about but it caught my attention

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    monica_decosta is offline Composer
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    ^this is soo true

    good one




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