good poem, well written
i feel like the expression factor is great and the connection is good but if you could add a few really strong analogies or metaphors in there, it would add a lot to the poem... like when you say meadow or plain... the feeling is there... but like maybe you could incorporate like the plain of empty thoughts and dreams or like the meadow of long lost innocence... shiznit like that might help... i mean i'm not a real poet or pro but i feel like these strong bridges are the clearest way to express and hence inspire...
great poem though.. your poems or songs are raw and have power,
i like that
if there is a gap between the finite (us) and the infinite, music at least makes one believe not only that there is an infinite, but that he can reach it -- for he can feel it. fire, bliss, and conviction are the plants arising from seeds of music. music is a beautiful, beautiful thing.