Jeene ko ik umr

heyy,here is another one....how is it...

Dil to khush hai,lekin,aankh bhari ho jaise,
Tera milna bhi koi dukh ki ghari ho jaise….

Phir kaanp gaya dil,sham-e-tanhai ke baad,
Saamne maut khari ho jaise…

Aaj phir kahi hamne,isharon mein apne dil ki baat,
Vo phir hans diye,kuch samjha hi nahi ho jaise..

Subh-e-vaslat bhi kuch,yun,tanha guzri,
Shab-e-hijran guzri hi nahi ho jaise..

Log ab bhi kartein hain mujhse,tumhari baatein,
Inki nazron mein,tu ab bhi meri ho jaise…

Tum bhi nadaan ho ki dil se jeete hi nahi,
Jeene ko ik umr pari ho jaise….

i liked it

mujhe vo gana yaad aa gaya ...

Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise
Tune aankhon se koyi baat kahi ho jaise
Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise
Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise
Jaan baaki baaki hai magar saas ruki ho jaise

Originally Posted by Ali Yawar

heyy,here is another one....how is it...

Dil to khush hai,lekin,aankh bhari ho jaise,
Tera milna bhi koi dukh ki ghari ho jaise….

Phir kaanp gaya dil,sham-e-tanhai ke baad,
Saamne maut khari ho jaise…

Aaj phir kahi hamne,isharon mein apne dil ki baat,
Vo phir hans diye,kuch samjha hi nahi ho jaise..

Subh-e-vaslat bhi kuch,yun,tanha guzri,
Shab-e-hijran guzri hi nahi ho jaise..

Log ab bhi kartein hain mujhse,tumhari baatein,
Inki nazron mein,tu ab bhi meri ho jaise…

Tum bhi nadaan ho ki dil se jeete hi nahi,
Jeene ko ik umr pari ho jaise….

Great lines.. Ali is on a roll... Keep posting!

Dude, you're a fab gazal writer..
cheers!

thanks horsey....

thanks rickky..these days I am writing a lot of ghazals...I will try to post all of them here...

Thanks..yes that ghazal is good...jagjeet singh has sung it very beautifully....I also liked the song....