wrote this one last nite... i think its somehow related to a poem dat i rote n posted here long time back... it was called "THE REPLY"... so yea hope u get SOME part of this poem... anyway.. enough of the talking.. here the poem...
--> The Invitation
The invitation that i sent you wasnt a lie
come let me show you a part of my life
stand still and let me explain
whatever you see is more of a game
so just stand still and let me explain
just turn around and look at the walls
they all seem so blank to u
but to me they are the world
till i break them down and deicide to move on
stop flipping through those pages of those books
you wont find anything to your good
its all written in a languauge which is better not understood
just stand still and let me TRY to explain
ok just try feel the heavenly breeze
everytime i feel it, it reminds me of a new dawn...
dont make that face that you cant feel it at all!
i finally give up hope n walk you to the door
"just let me know the next time you plan to drop by", i whispered
"i'll change my world for you TILL u plan to hang around..."
i dont think the poem needs any explaination but basically... its about showing around wat ma life is all about BUT it just doesnt make sense to anyone... n well yea dats wat usually happens in normal life too if u think about it... n yea in the end u r just like buzz off! but the next time u wanna look around tell me before u come... i'll try showing u something u wanna see... or rather something dat makes sense to u... n one more thing... see in the poem EVERYTIME "I" try showing around like PROPERLY as in by giving details... i am just distracted by the "VISITORS" reactions or expressions... or atleast dats wat i have tried to portray... then again u r more then welcomed to take the poem in watever sense u want! hehe
thx for reading n like always comments r welcomed...