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  1. #1
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    interviewing the GOD


    your comments are my treasure..go ahead with your criticism too

    standing infront of God inquired HOW HE created the world,
    he simply raised the eye brows and paid no attention
    watched my antics to attract him and kept mum
    directed with fingers to sit in corner in opposite direction,

    finished the pending game and welcomed me
    gave the green beep to go ahead and pose any question
    thanking HIM for the time and feeling lucky
    for the interview chance still covered by no one.

    shown to me the basic ingredients to create the life,
    emphasizing on the point of destiny and reason to smile.

    creating union for the happiness of soul,
    but defended the idea of heart break.
    with a cute smile on face
    stressed the need the importance to equate.

    created beauty to make the world a place to live
    and given the hope and dream to achieve
    lost temper on the state of world
    cursing human who forget humanity and left that to cry and die

    he branded the path where we have to walk
    but we HUMANS makes it curve and cross
    we soulful idiots loose the patience early
    as soon as HE throws the tough dice.

    evryone cannot be allowed to have silverspoon
    thats why he created the modest and honest.
    sprinkling the powder of logic and sentiments
    and human attitude burnt them for the race to be an elite.

    greed,hatred were not picked up at all.
    recipe was perfectly blended and left for the stipulated time being.
    anger were never the seasoning,
    leak happned and jealousy formed while experimenting

    god answered my all questions and left someone
    mind was blank with so many questions and messy confusion,
    noted down all his answers up to the fact and truth.
    as human did not satisfied me and unable to soothe.

    all of us at some point will experience robbing of innocence or spirit-weakening of that time it seems horrible or at least diffficult but later on you will hear people say that it was the best thing that happened to them becoz it clarified who they are & what life is to them. it puts us in touch with deeper things.
    two people can see the same thing,disagree and yet both be's not logical;its psychological

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    Nicely captured, but am not a taker for these thoughts.
    Am agnostic,
    mebbe to te point of being atheist.

    Good writing.
    You donít get what you deserve, you get what you negotiate.

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    good stuff...reminds me Neo's encounter with Matrix creator...

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    vini is offline Repeat Offender
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    very nice work man

    "mind was blank with so many questions "
    blank yet full..hmmmm
    .. Rock got no reason
    Rock got no rhyme ..

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    really good piece of work,liked it very much....
    TaKe LiFe As It CoMes....

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    nice thought.... rohit... well expressed....
    नमो सुरस्वयंसिद्धा, नमो नादस्वरुपीणि I
    नमो ब्रम्हांडध्वनिर्मयी, नमो तस्यै नमो नमः II
    ----------- निमिषा-----------------

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    shifted from paradise city to Axe Land:D
    nice poem
    very well written
    but i don't quite agree wid that
    >>>>>>>>NEVER GONNA STEAL POINTS,<<<<<<<
    >>>>>>>>>>>>>REP ME PLEASE!!<<<<<<<<<<<<

    u think life's a *****......................................and
    then u meet me.




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