just wrote something........couldnt complete it ....... will work over it thought i could get some feedback over it for correction or improvements
Sultanat-e-haywaaniyat ki pairavee main khauf-e-khudawandi bhula baithey
unchey azaim unchey khayalat talay eeman dafna baithey
waqt ki daur main jeet ki hawas ko maqsood-e-zindagi jaan kar
maut-e-barhaq ki us haar ko ranjish samajh bhula baithey
laut kar ultay paaon chaley yun apney kal ki taraf
nazariya-e-mustaqbil liye zamana-e-haal gawa baithey
beenaai paa kar na beena ban kar ankhain mond leney waley
khud ko daana jaan kar na daan apni qabr jala baithey
aya jo yaum-e-hashr huee phir aamaal ki poooch-gachh
to sochain hua kya hasil jis par sarmaya-e-zindagi luta baithey
what do you think?
EDIT: I used a word in this poem inappropriately.....i wonder if u could figure out........ but does anyone know the literal meaning of 'Myth' in urdu?