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  1. #1
    reshbal is offline Newbie
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    i want see this poem tunned!

    Lonely palm tree waved me in
    Long ago to lovely green
    Plummeted to much scared island,
    Some time it was heavenly,
    otherwise, gone hell with it.

    Every dawn brought in birds,
    Lovely visitors, I love them most.
    Itinerant creatures never stayed,
    every dusk brought me forlorn.

    Freezing water around the land,
    made me prisoner by ruler in me.

    Laying on this dark green grass,
    Gazing into the moonless sky,
    Perhaps I sited ..
    a star through the waving palm leaves

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    nandy0894 is offline IGT Addict
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    nice one...

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    wow gr8
    i loved it

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    horsesmouth is offline IGTIAN
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    i did'nt fully understand the theme. The imagery is good though. I like to do that too.
    Welcome to this place, as dead it may seem. Hope to see more from you.
    I've hung around and I've taken my time,
    I've beat the dust and kissed the grime;
    Stand I shall, not for you though,
    Its just me now, wherever I may go.

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    avi.singh is offline 6 strings lover
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    good imagination...and style...liked it.!!
    :-'. vi

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    yogiscorp is offline Newbie
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    kkkkkkk.................................... good 1 ...dude ... keep on trying .. like this ... good



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