The theme,of course,is pretty common..funnny how most of the poets go through the same damn thing..anyway,yeah well it's written nicely..felt the break-up was abrupt but that's fine..written well but the exclaimations,I found a bit wrong esp. after reading the whole thing.
I wouldn't really say "Aha!I remember you!" to a girl who dumped me(unless I have amnesia),of course I remember her..but you got that right towards the end..the whole "but still"..and "always" was better that "hey!"..
Bottom line though,the poem's good..feels heartfelt..keep writing.
"I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."
"So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
And only God knows why..."
Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock