Hmmm...well I especially liked stanza 1...2 and 3 are pretty good too..It's sweet and simple..nothing wrong with it though the title feels to be remotely related (when I have nothing to complain about I start criticizing titles)..
Well it's really a good write and since you mentioned you wrote it at that moment,it's really credible...portrays that maternal instinct in women too..so,again,it's sweet and simple..liked it.
"I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."
"So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
And only God knows why..."
Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock