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    Thot will quit poetry.. but something in my ass brings me here again n again.. lost in this crowd.. again stands this soul...

    You don't deserve me
    something which i wana say
    You don't care for me
    Just leave me n go ur way

    Love is not a joke
    which everyone can share
    Feelings are just a pain
    which need guts to dare

    One day you will remember
    when i will not b there
    one stupid liked me like hell
    n stupids like him are really rare...

    I tried my best to hate u
    but this ****ing heart ditched
    I will hate love my whole life
    with something broken that can't b fixed..


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    Thought that you'll quite writing poetry? Why? If you like to do it, then why would u try n force yourself not to?

    Just curious.

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    nice presentation of your innermost upheavel of emotions.....

    another feather in your cap................

    keep writing

    all of us at some point will experience robbing of innocence or spirit-weakening of that time it seems horrible or at least diffficult but later on you will hear people say that it was the best thing that happened to them becoz it clarified who they are & what life is to them. it puts us in touch with deeper things.
    two people can see the same thing,disagree and yet both be's not logical;its psychological

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    wahts taht knw some thing opposite to my ass take me to many good places....cha cha

    ur poem was good ....mugambo kush huaa....but i bet u cant quit...!

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    haha..nice reason to resume poetry..anyways its a nice poem..I can see this is a different point of view at break ups...nice one..the ending though used many times before was pretty effective..
    "I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."

    "So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
    And only God knows why..."

    Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock

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    nice work....emotions penned in words reading it sways with the feelings..
    ANUM *****Do Good, Be Good and Feel good******

    & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ &

    When I do good, I feel good; when I do bad, I feel bad, and that is my religion.


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    so now u getting over haan!!

    hehe.. nice way to say it..
    great poem there..
    नमो सुरस्वयंसिद्धा, नमो नादस्वरुपीणि I
    नमो ब्रम्हांडध्वनिर्मयी, नमो तस्यै नमो नमः II
    ----------- निमिषा-----------------

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    hmmmm.... got no comments for this one... i mean yea good poem blah blah/etc etc... BUT sad....
    .: is it just |\/|E ... or is it the \/\/0rLD? :.

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    thanx for liking my poems..



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