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  1. #1
    monica_decosta is offline Composer
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    Oct 2006

    Post finish the day keep the 's

    Under the thick mushorrms is a small groove
    soft to touch but often roudy
    the wiskey was warm, gulbed it neat
    to aflot the nose, he pulled the entire body

    still can catch on my senses, i can breathe
    i want the world drown
    Its a mid may night im floting on the river
    with the ferry playing 3 doors down

    he swims so well in the moon dipped water
    call's me in the lurid desire
    enslaved is my dream to his drousy request
    go-deep without my cupid attire

    man oh man u make me feel
    read and smile..yes me confess
    we share or lives a part of time
    finish the day keep the 's

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    kundan22kandy is offline Newbie
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    Aug 2009
    great work monica dicosta
    i tried this song in Dm Bb f and c
    thnx ............
    waiting for ur next poem.....

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    horsesmouth is offline IGTIAN
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    Jan 2009
    ur works always contain this rawness......naturalescence that i luv 2 read
    keep it up!
    I've hung around and I've taken my time,
    I've beat the dust and kissed the grime;
    Stand I shall, not for you though,
    Its just me now, wherever I may go.

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    monica_decosta is offline Composer
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    thanks kundan.. & horsemouth..



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