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    Even game

    Even game

    life is a game, which you gotta play
    theres no respect, for what you say
    life is a gamble, on which you bet
    theres no profit every other day

    i am no stranger to victory here
    each and every day, is not your day
    roll the dice, pray for your luck,
    you cant be lucky , eacfh and every day

    you trun back, u cry for yesterday
    when u look ahead, hope for a better day
    i am here to see, your hope doesnt come true
    time and time , to win over you

    Theres no way, you get rid of me
    theres no way, ill let you go
    u hafta pay up, for what youve done
    i pay up, for what ive got

    my victory is your defeat here
    your victory is my defeat here
    no one wants to lose the game
    its better if you lose the game
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    श्रीपरमात्मने नमः
    अथ श्रीमद्भगवद्गीता
    धृतराष्ट्र उवाच
    धर्मक्षेत्रे कुरुक्षेत्रे समवेता युयुत्सवः ।
    मामकाः पाण्डवाश्चैव किमकुर्वत संजय ॥१-१॥

    میں اردو نہیں بولتا
    To live is to die ...

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    Nice poem I Like:
    "my victory is your defeat here
    your victory is my defeat here"
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    Now this one is much much better. Good work.
    Overwhelmed as one would be, placed in my position
    Such a heavy burden now to be the one
    Born to bear and read you all the details of our ending
    To write it down for all the world to see
    But I forgot my pen, Shit the bed again...

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    loved the concept...
    I THINK,
    therefore I am SINGLE...

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    The concept is good, but you are changing the rhyming scheme for every stanza... that slightly disturbs the rythm the poem... Just a small piece of advice from me.
    " Give us the strength, oh lord, to let our children starve" - Roald Dahl.



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