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    Smile Ek beti ki kahani

    Aaj hum yaha le ke aaye hai Ek Beti ki kahani..shayad aap logo ko pasand aaye..hume aapke vichar zaroor batayega..shukriya..
    Betiyaan Kis ke ghar main rehti hain?
    Ban ke rehmat jab yeh uttarti hain
    Dhan paraya ais ka ghar yeh nahi
    Sun kar ais talkh haqeeqat ko
    Phir bhi woh muskurati rehti hain

    Maa ke aanchal ko odh leti hain
    ais ke sab dukh sambhal leti hain
    Woh hanse saath us ke hansti hain
    Us ki aankhon main agar aye paani
    Apne dill main utaar leti hain
    Ghar yeh un ka nahi hai
    Sun kar bhi sara ghar sambhal leti hain

    Baap ka maan sara unse hai
    Izzat or shaan sari unse hai
    Baat jo unke dil main hoti hai
    Betiyaan khud se jaan leti hain
    Apne bhaion se pyaar karti hain
    Har khushi un par waar deti hain
    Koi gham paas aye na unke
    Har ghadi ais dua main rehti hain

    Apne babul ke ghar ki chidiyaan hain
    Door kahin unka thikaana hai
    Phir bhi woh chehchahati rehti hain
    Phool khusiyun ke khillati rehti hain
    Maan ki aankhon ke roshni hai
    Woh baap ke dil ka chain hai

    Jitni bhaion ki sewa karti hai
    Itna bhai bhi un se pyaar karte hain
    Phir bhi woh phool apne angan ka
    Kyun kisi or ko de dete hain?

    Jate jate Yeh kahani
    Woh ais ke kanoon main utar dete hain
    Phir laut kar na aana tum
    aik naya ghar basana tum
    Ab woh ghar hi tera thikana hai
    Apne babul ko bhool jana hai
    Tum ne reet yeh nibhani hai

    Maan ke seekhe ki laaj rakhni hai
    Sab ke dil main jaga banani hai
    aik duniya nayi basaani hai
    Sare rishton ka naam rakhna hai
    Apne babul ka naam rakhna hai

    Sari batein woh kitabe dil par
    Woh aansu se uttar leti hain
    Khool ke band dareeche palkon ke
    Bawuzu ho kar aansu se woh
    Apne babul ke baste aangan ki
    Aajazi se duaein mangti hain

    Betiyaan be khata hoti hain
    Phir bhi woh jate hoye
    Babul se apne har jurm bakhshwati hain
    Maan ke qadam choom kar dua leti hain
    Woh sakhi jo saath kheeli ho
    Sukh dukh ki jo saheli ho
    Shafqatein or muhabbtein sab ki
    Har naseehat duaein har lab ki
    Zakheera yeh sara chalte hoye
    Apne aanchal se band leti hain

    Jate hoye palat kar mudti hain
    Or aik sakhi se yeh sawaal karti hain
    Betiyon ka nahi hai ghar koi?
    phir yeh kyun dil main ghar banati hain?
    Woh sakhi yun jawab deti hai
    Kaun kehta hai ain ka ghar hi nahi?

    Betiyaan sab ke dil main rehti hain
    Maan ka aanchal hi ghar kabhi ain ka
    Baap ke daste dua main rehti hain
    Pyaar bhai ka saibaan un ka
    Or asal ghar to dil hai saajan ka
    Har jaga un ke dam se raunaq hai
    Betiyaan har har jaga par rehti hain
    Ghar faqt unke naam se baste hain
    log sirf un ke dam se hanste hain

    Behan beti ho maan ho ya biwi ho
    Yeh sirf naam hi badli hai
    asal main betiyaan hi hoti hain
    ponch le aansu apni aankhon ke
    sab thikaane tere thikaane hain
    Meka susraal ya tera sajan
    Saare rishte tujhe nibhane hain
    Tere saajan ka dil hi tera ghar
    Ab woh hi tera thikaana hai............
    Gathered here in so much love
    Hearts are so entwined
    Gifts of love we think of now
    Words so filled with rhyme
    Love we will always share as
    Friends are by my side
    Constant beauty in my life
    Friendship now resides

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    hey...writting poem is your full time job kya? because such consistent good work can be achieved only with dedication toward work.

    I am flat...
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    Quote Originally Posted by amit82cse
    hey...writting poem is your full time job kya? because such consistent good work can be achieved only with dedication toward work.

    I am flat...
    Thanks yaar for liking the work..Nope not full time job but joh kaam karte hai hum puri dil-o-jaan se karte hai warna kya faida..?right..
    Gathered here in so much love
    Hearts are so entwined
    Gifts of love we think of now
    Words so filled with rhyme
    Love we will always share as
    Friends are by my side
    Constant beauty in my life
    Friendship now resides

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    absolutely right!
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    nice work...
    .: is it just |\/|E ... or is it the \/\/0rLD? :.

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    Quote Originally Posted by #iR@
    nice work...
    Thanks Hira for taking time to read the nazm and appreciating it..
    Gathered here in so much love
    Hearts are so entwined
    Gifts of love we think of now
    Words so filled with rhyme
    Love we will always share as
    Friends are by my side
    Constant beauty in my life
    Friendship now resides

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    so nice sweeti.

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    Quote Originally Posted by desertrose_niti
    so nice sweeti.
    Thanks for appreciating my dear
    Gathered here in so much love
    Hearts are so entwined
    Gifts of love we think of now
    Words so filled with rhyme
    Love we will always share as
    Friends are by my side
    Constant beauty in my life
    Friendship now resides

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    try in for ekta kapoor serials....ul definetely get a job there
    Life is like a negros left ball...neither fair not right

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    Quote Originally Posted by $cReWdR!veR
    try in for ekta kapoor serials....ul definetely get a job there
    thank you my dear for such a wonderful compliment but nope i wouldnt take this as a job as its my passion and feeling that i write..but once again thanks for the compliment
    Gathered here in so much love
    Hearts are so entwined
    Gifts of love we think of now
    Words so filled with rhyme
    Love we will always share as
    Friends are by my side
    Constant beauty in my life
    Friendship now resides

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    Emotions in words.

    Although it took me a long time to read it all and font being in italics dint really help but i can say that all the t ime spent in reading it got its value.

    Its amazing how you can convert your feelings in words and others can identify the emotions so clearly.

    Do need to say anything else?

    Just try keeping that font in bold...LOL
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    Quote Originally Posted by walk_alone
    Although it took me a long time to read it all and font being in italics dint really help but i can say that all the t ime spent in reading it got its value.

    Its amazing how you can convert your feelings in words and others can identify the emotions so clearly.

    Do need to say anything else?

    Just try keeping that font in bold...LOL
    i have edit'd it my dear
    Gathered here in so much love
    Hearts are so entwined
    Gifts of love we think of now
    Words so filled with rhyme
    Love we will always share as
    Friends are by my side
    Constant beauty in my life
    Friendship now resides

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    Thank you Pamposh for taking time out to read this nazm and
    thank you for appreciating my dear..
    Gathered here in so much love
    Hearts are so entwined
    Gifts of love we think of now
    Words so filled with rhyme
    Love we will always share as
    Friends are by my side
    Constant beauty in my life
    Friendship now resides

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    @sweetie...If you dont mind then may I ask...what do you do? I want to know how ones life may have impact in his/her passion for writting poems.
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