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    rongbazzz is offline F.U.C.K IS LIFE
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    Talking dream within a dream

    Take this kiss upon the brow!
    And, in parting from you now,
    Thus much let me avow-
    You are not wrong, who deem
    That my days have been a dream;
    Yet if hope has flown away
    In a night, or in a day,
    In a vision, or in none,
    Is it therefore the less gone?
    All that we see or seem
    Is but a dream within a dream.

    I stand amid the roar
    Of a surf-tormented shore,
    And I hold within my hand
    Grains of the golden sand-
    How few! yet how they creep
    Through my fingers to the deep,
    While I weep- while I weep!
    O God! can I not grasp
    Them with a tighter clasp?
    O God! can I not save
    One from the pitiless wave?
    Is all that we see or seem
    But a dream within a dream?

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    Very Very Good. Really liked it. Write more stuff like this, don't deviate. Good work.
    Overwhelmed as one would be, placed in my position
    Such a heavy burden now to be the one
    Born to bear and read you all the details of our ending
    To write it down for all the world to see
    But I forgot my pen, Shit the bed again...

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    maverick8218 is offline Guitarist
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    that was good, rongbazz... a ruthless poetry( i frankly don't know why i feel this way).
    " Give us the strength, oh lord, to let our children starve" - Roald Dahl.

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    CrYpTiC_angel is offline Rebelle!
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    You actually copied something by Edgar Allen Poe...




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