^^you can do that best i guess
as you know how you want it to be
finding a person with similar thoughts and style is quite a task..
post the corrections/update
and its a nice fusion
i like it..
the central and underlying theme is well-expressed..
Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
Where life and its ventures are laid,
The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
May see us in sunshine or shade;
Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
We'll trim our broad sail as before,
And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
Nor ask how we look from the shore!
Oliver Wendell Holmes