Hey dont demean and disrespect your own work by callling it crap dude/dudette
its a nice poem..
i like how something inanimate is related to life and furthermore, its death..
Hope to see more of your work
since i presume you've jus started posting
Welcome to the forum..
Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
Where life and its ventures are laid,
The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
May see us in sunshine or shade;
Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
We'll trim our broad sail as before,
And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
Nor ask how we look from the shore!
Oliver Wendell Holmes