Follow Us On Follow us on Facebook Follow us on Twitter Watch us on YouTube
Results 1 to 10 of 10
  1. #1
    b-gin is offline Newbie
    Join Date
    Feb 2006

    Dark Sunlight (1st post at this site)

    What is the cost of brighter days?
    Sun scorching you with violent rays
    Bask in clear skies ever so blue
    Watch dark clouds ruin your afternoon

    Breathe in everything that you can
    Feel life grip you with its outstretched hand
    Sail in oceans skewered with rebirth
    But never backtrack to see how much you're worth

    Rainy days will come and go
    And mystic legends
    won't leave much room to grow
    Life is nothing but a balance beam
    Too much of anything is more than you need

    Beneath the canyons in the valley below
    Beams of light slip through wet cottonballs to show
    Shadows of the towering cliffs above
    Exposing a better place, built on love

    Stroll through the garden of regret
    Ponder all of the things you didn't get
    Bow your gastful head in sorrow
    forget to harvest what you need for tommorrow

    As you pass by the rapidly rising river
    Don't for a minute stop to shake or shiver
    Swim fiercely around the treacherous driftwood
    Floating by like the ranks of man, doing no good

    Do not fear the hollows
    After you fall
    You always get up again
    Flee from all that is shallow
    Fill your glass half full
    Live out your moment of zen

  2. #2
    CrYpTiC_angel's Avatar
    CrYpTiC_angel is offline Rebelle!
    Join Date
    Aug 2005
    alpha1's pants

    Glad to have you here

    That is a wonderful piece of poetry... Absolutely beautiful!

    And you're getting ur very 1st rep frm me for ur very 1st post, good goin'

  3. #3
    apurbajd's Avatar
    apurbajd is offline ~#$&*$@*^$
    Join Date
    Jun 2005
    ^^nd very 2nd rep 4m me ...............

    nicely written ....... post some more ................
    where's my siggy?

  4. #4
    sweetie's Avatar
    sweetie is offline Beginner
    Join Date
    Feb 2006
    Nicely written my dear and expressed..
    hoping to read more from you
    Gathered here in so much love
    Hearts are so entwined
    Gifts of love we think of now
    Words so filled with rhyme
    Love we will always share as
    Friends are by my side
    Constant beauty in my life
    Friendship now resides

  5. #5
    Subhro's Avatar
    Subhro is offline Argentina lost :"(
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Brilliant !!!!! Brilliant !!!!!

    bring in some more..

    got some inspiration frm ur poem. am kinda goin thru a rough patch. cud relate wid ur poem.. keep it up.

    3rd rep frm me! cheers!
    Opinions are like a$$holes. Evrybdy has one.


  6. #6
    madhuresh's Avatar
    madhuresh is offline madhuresh
    Join Date
    Jun 2005
    ya abt the thoughts u have.... i feel this way that this workd is like a streached string nothings goes too far, either ways , no matter how much u strech, u will not bouce very tath produces songs like INTHE END(linkin park) but it has a very positive side 4 people like me who keep commiting mistakes ....nothg goes too far, kar jo karna hai yaar !

  7. #7
    b-gin is offline Newbie
    Join Date
    Feb 2006
    Thank you all for replying. I am glad you all appreciate this piece. It is one of my favorites. I will def continue to post here.

  8. #8
    alpha1's Avatar
    alpha1 is offline I BLUES!
    Join Date
    Dec 2005
    That's really good..
    Quote Originally Posted by b-gin
    I will def continue to post here.
    Please do!
    You don’t get what you deserve, you get what you negotiate.

  9. #9
    Hardik's Avatar
    Hardik is offline .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    B-e-a-utiful poetry...keep posting b-gin...reps 4 u
    TaKe LiFe As It CoMes....

  10. #10
    Petunia's Avatar
    Petunia is offline terminally dorky
    Join Date
    Nov 2005
    In my Dreams.
    Quote Originally Posted by b-gin
    But never backtrack to see how much you're worth

    Thats my favorite line in there..hits me hard cos its so true!!!
    Awesome peice of poetry...bgin! keep it up.

    reps for you, ma man!
    anshphenomenon: so let's get married..and let's ping!
    petunia: ..and have little PING PONGS!! lmfao..
    anshphenomenon: beti ping
    anshphenomenon: beta pong

    (`'•.¸(`'•.¸ ¸.•'´) ¸.•'´)

    "I had not achieved success; but i had provoked an uproar; and the sensation that followed was so agreeable that I resolved to try again."..George Bernard Shaw. <3

    (`'•.¸(`'•.¸ ¸.•'´) ¸.•'´)



Similar Threads

  1. Dark Jazz Anyone ?
    By shsnawada in forum Music Talk
    Replies: 27
    Last Post: 08-26-2008, 10:46 AM
  2. The Dark Alley
    By Petunia in forum Poetry and Lyrics Forum
    Replies: 10
    Last Post: 02-15-2006, 01:42 AM
  3. Dark Dec night
    By madhuresh in forum Poetry and Lyrics Forum
    Replies: 10
    Last Post: 12-28-2005, 09:43 PM
  4. My Dark Angel
    By CrYpTiC_angel in forum Poetry and Lyrics Forum
    Replies: 34
    Last Post: 11-08-2005, 03:55 PM
  5. dark tonight by jc
    By jaycee in forum Poetry and Lyrics Forum
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: 08-23-2005, 12:45 AM


Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
Single Sign On provided by vBSSO