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  1. 02-04-2012, 12:37 AM #1
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    ye kis ki parchaayi hai
    kise dhoondh rahi hai
    aanath hai shayad
    ya raasta bhool gayi hai
    ya phir faink gaya hoga koi
    raat ke andhere main
    naarangi sooraj
    aur kaali sadkoon ke beech..

    dari huee hai
    ye gali badi sunsaan hai na
    sab soo jate hain iss waqt tak
    rang, umar, kad khaathi batana mushkil hai
    javaan ladki lagti hai jab lamp post ke paas jati hai
    aur choti bacchi jab mere pass rehti hai
    ladki hai ye sach hai

    abhi jab kuch kuute lad rahe the
    udhar koode ke dheer ke pass
    tab aayi ...mere pass
    hum ne khel khela
    ek dusare ko choone ka
    paas aane ka duur jane ka
    lukka chhuppi bhi..

    Sun parchaayi
    darr mujhe bhi lagta hai
    andhere ka nahi, kutton ka nahi
    na insaanoon ka na bhagvaan ka
    sooraj ka..
    subhe ka..
    sab jaan jayenge
    hum bhi jaan jayenge
    tu kaun hai... main kaun hunn
    tera naam mera dharm
    kush dukhi
    gori kaali
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    life..!!
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  2. 02-05-2012, 09:36 AM #2
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    Nice lines... Title can be.. Astitva ?
    One suggestion... Don't add English words in this..
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  3. 02-08-2012, 06:51 PM #3
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    subhaaan alllaahh!! :P
    amazing lines and yes i agree with rickkky ..do not add english words to it..it seems to over shadow the fear and the emotion..
    and the title..umm my suggestion .. tanha parchhai or maybe khoi parchhai ??
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  4. 02-08-2012, 07:16 PM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by nandy0894 View Post
    subhaaan alllaahh!! :P
    amazing lines and yes i agree with rickkky ..do not add english words to it..it seems to over shadow the fear and the emotion..
    and the title..umm my suggestion .. tanha parchhai or maybe khoi parchhai ??
    Really good lines...Well arranged thoughts..

    hey nandy u mean "Bhatakti aatma"...naa must be sumthing else ?
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  5. 02-08-2012, 08:11 PM #5
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    Quote Originally Posted by mymusicmyguitar View Post
    Really good lines...Well arranged thoughts..

    hey nandy u mean "Bhatakti aatma"...naa must be sumthing else ?

    hahahahaha..!!!
    tanha..khoi and BHATAKTI..aren't really synonyms dude..hahah...lmao..!
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  6. 02-08-2012, 08:24 PM #6
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    Quote Originally Posted by nandy0894 View Post
    hahahahaha..!!!
    tanha..khoi and BHATAKTI..aren't really synonyms dude..hahah...lmao..!
    They might not be synonyms but are related in a way :P..
    LOL!!!!
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