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  1. #1
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    horsesmouth is offline IGTIAN
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    Smile A choice to regret, a chance to forget

    Well this happened with me, in china.....I wont go deep, but few would understand what I mean...

    Standing in the street,
    She's looking down below.
    What she is or could've been,
    she does'nt seem to know.

    A stranger crosses by,
    staring at her loneliness.
    But she is what she's become,
    so he tries to go away.
    He's so repulsive,
    But he leaves a shine in his wake,
    A message to show her true face;
    and a chance she has to take.

    They share a melody, a hymn universal,
    though strangers, they simply rhyme.
    Dont know what the other speaks,
    Their tongues are common through time.

    She thinks who he is,
    coming from nowhere or the sky?
    Showering rains of happiness,
    These moments might last forever.

    But he had to leave,
    A moment she'd hated.
    Their words are still unspoken,
    but their hearts are so elated.

    He leaves her at crossroads,
    to be what she is,
    or fight for what can be;
    This is hard to miss,
    Though its a nameless target.
    She still has an option;
    Its a choice to regret,
    and a chance to forget,
    She now has a direction.
    I've hung around and I've taken my time,
    I've beat the dust and kissed the grime;
    Stand I shall, not for you though,
    Its just me now, wherever I may go.

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    madhuresh is offline madhuresh
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    i like it
    again a femanine prespective...what ever whts gud is gud .. !

    keep the ink alive

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    Thumbs down Cheater...

    Hey its me..ur girl friend..
    i totally understand the meaning of ur poem..
    u cheater...
    did u really kiss that girl in china ?? i feel sorry for u.

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    madhuresh is offline madhuresh
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    Jun 2005
    drama starts....

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    Smile sorry

    sorry for d last post.i din mean to hurt u

    although i like ur all r very good...nd i wld like to continue reading ur poems with ur permission.u r really very intelligent strong nd yet so sensitive..nd much more than that i know..God bless!!!..I'll always love nd respect u no matter what happens...i want to c u happy coz dat makes me happy..hehee. :P
    U ROCK! :D

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    monica_decosta is offline Composer
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    wow smthing happnig here, what is it ant exactly clear....(springfields..)

    gud poem horse



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