A brilliant write all the way,really...your writing is expressive.I could feel what you were trying to say and the poem in itself made a lot of sense..rather than being just about a sad love story it is more about the war every heart broken person has to face after losing some1 and we indeed end up "observing the void".You've maintained the balance of hope and helplessness in every stanza..liked it a lot.Keep posting.
"I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."
"So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
And only God knows why..."
Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock