First of all,good to see you after a long time...
hmmmm... i am kinda confused about this poem... i know its good, actually VERY GOOD... ok whatever i rite now is what i ACTUALLY HAVE IN MY MIND... i reallyyyyyyy don know why i didn;t like it AS MUCH AS I LIKE THE OTHER POEMS U RITE! *scared* PLEASE DON KILL ME!
Okay the Don't Kill Me part,hilarious...I appreciate honesty more than anything..
I have to make a few romantic/mushy/sad typical poems to come up with something new...hence,Blur (thats perhaps the lamest excuse..)
Its fine if you didn't like it...come to think of it, its just another "broken heart" theme..the good thing is,you replied eventhough you didn't like it..
And its actually good to know I can do better...
"I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."
"So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
And only God knows why..."
Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock