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    Amanush... is offline Tanha Rahi...!
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    Smile The Black Angel...!

    The Black Angel

    The black angel has returned
    to knock at my door
    he has entered without I realized of it,
    in the absolute silence
    of his nonexistent footsteps
    winding me with his mantle
    made of smoke and darkness.

    Changeable creature of the darkest night
    he has taken me without a complaint
    coming out of my icy lips
    white as the wax…

    I only want to run away ,
    in the obscurity,
    to expand my broken wings
    and to fly far, far away
    in the night that I love
    towards my dark and malignant bride
    and in her deadly embrace
    I want to be able to rest


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    #iR@ is offline GANDI BACHI RELOADED
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    u rite really well... really liked it keep it up!
    .: is it just |\/|E ... or is it the \/\/0rLD? :.

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    apurbajd is offline ~#$&*$@*^$
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    nice poem buddy......................... reps 4 u ....

    btw wat with the red color man.......... hurts my eyes a lot................ ;-)
    where's my siggy?

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    CrYpTiC_angel is offline Rebelle!
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    not as good as ur other poems, but still pretty good

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    esgallindeion is offline Minstrel Knight
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    Nice poem, good spooky atmosphere successfuly created. But this line is a bit bugging...

    Quote Originally Posted by Amanush...
    he has entered without I realized of it
    The words of a banished king
    "I swear revenge"
    Filled with anger aflamed our hearts
    Full of hate full of pride...
    Oh, we screamed for revenge
    - Blind Guardian (Nightfall)



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