Hey, u did try to put a great piece...but the the thuoght got lost.To add to it...the verses do not go hand in hand inn thought after first 6 lines....
I am sure you will agree when you write any thing in poetry,then the verses should have a godd "tukbandi as well".......
But I can imagine your thought behind it......I am sorry ..cannot rep you...!!!!
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