The Arrival

I see you standing there
waiting for ur love
In the breeze you look so fair
like the sun so high above
In your eyes, to strong to weep
to see nothings arrived
In your heart your tears did seep
from emotion that you've thrived
Of your pain met the covered sky
as rain began to fall from sleep
There you gave your final sigh
Then for you nature did weep
With your back to the clouds,
you started your walk
and followed your lonely road
As your foot hit the ground, you started to talk
to the person that never showed
Every word u pressed to speak
to you he did not reply
Again of him your ears do seek
no sound to hear but a cry
A cry that could you only hear
to you that is so near
Can only be so far away, so far away as the sky

THIS WAS THE BEST POEM I HAVE COME ACROSS WHICK MY FRIEND HAD MAILED.. ITS A FOWARD.. WISH I CUD COMPOSE SUCH BEAUTIFUL WORKS

let me guess...author is certainly a female...

thik hai......

certainly not the best i have ever read......iam totally confused abt this poem.

Good attempt, but certainly NOT the best i've ever come across, a random selection from my friend's anthology could beat this poem hand's down, in fact here is one

time snagged
on the cliff hanger's dream
a rainbow leap's distance from the edge of infinity
my crystallized prism inside a snow-flake dream
can i drift a little longer
or will you pull me down again
rift tide dancing below the drowned, swirling sun
see me ride
feel me... fly
across the faded, attic-dusted sky.
By Amber Schorr

Whooaaw....surely some gud stuff there.

Originally Posted by d_ist_urb_ed

Good attempt, but certainly NOT the best i've ever come across, a random selection from my friend's anthology could beat this poem hand's down, in fact here is one

time snagged
on the cliff hanger's dream
a rainbow leap's distance from the edge of infinity
my crystallized prism inside a snow-flake dream
can i drift a little longer
or will you pull me down again
rift tide dancing below the drowned, swirling sun
see me ride
feel me... fly
across the faded, attic-dusted sky.
By Amber Schorr

Originally Posted by walk_alone

certainly not the best i have ever read......iam totally confused abt this poem.

ITS ABT A GIRL WHO IS WAITING FOR HER LOVE BUT HE DOESNT TURN UP

Calm down pacino, we get it.

Actually the author is male

Here is the original post:

http://www.netpoets.com/poems/stories/1337001.htm

Originally Posted by rock all

I see you standing there
waiting for ur love
In the breeze you look so fair
like the sun so high above
In your eyes, to strong to weep
to see nothings arrived
In your heart your tears did seep
from emotion that you've thrived
Of your pain met the covered sky
as rain began to fall from sleep
There you gave your final sigh
Then for you nature did weep
With your back to the clouds,
you started your walk
and followed your lonely road
As your foot hit the ground, you started to talk
to the person that never showed
Every word u pressed to speak
to you he did not reply
Again of him your ears do seek
no sound to hear but a cry
A cry that could you only hear
to you that is so near
Can only be so far away, so far away as the sky

THIS WAS THE BEST POEM I HAVE COME ACROSS WHICK MY FRIEND HAD MAILED.. ITS A FOWARD.. WISH I CUD COMPOSE SUCH BEAUTIFUL WORKS

Thanks man, I really appreciate the props! It has been a while since I have written (1999) but Im glad people out there still appreciate this.