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    Smile To an Angel....

    To an Angel

    I saw a smile
    Brighter than realization
    Which made me realize
    That to reach the ears is
    The destiny of the corners of my mouth

    I saw those eyes
    Deeper than feelings
    Which made me feel
    That its possible to see
    Beyond this illusion called life

    I heard a voice
    More pleasant than sound of raindrops
    Which said to me
    That words are not to be spoken
    They are meant ot be meant

    I heard a laughter
    More pure than music
    Which taught me
    That songs are not meant to be heard
    But ot be felt,to be inhaled

    Yes,I saw someone
    More divine than beauty
    More soulful than moonlight
    More lustrous than pearls
    More radiant than sunlight
    And then i was sure
    That if there's an angel on earth,
    Its her,

    Its you......

    comments welcome...
    TaKe LiFe As It CoMes....

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    Wow..beautifully written !Good work buddy seems like youv bumped in2 ur angel...!All the best!
    Najane Kyun................

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    Made me smile, like a tard in the dining hall, Nice work bro
    "While the truncheon may be used in lieu of conversation, words will always retain their power. Words offer the means to meaning, and for those who will listen, the enunciation of truth."

    robotpajamas: since Im going to be giving the CAT this year
    d_ist_urb_ed: To whom?
    robotpajamas: Taking
    robotpajamas: f*ck you
    d_ist_urb_ed: =))

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    -Other side of the Horizon- you wouldnt wanna be there..
    Well written dude!
    Cancerians like you make right use of their emotions!

    favorite lines-"That words are not to be spoken
    They are meant to be meant"

    Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
    Where life and its ventures are laid,
    The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
    May see us in sunshine or shade;
    Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
    We'll trim our broad sail as before,
    And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
    Nor ask how we look from the shore!

    Oliver Wendell Holmes



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    @broken_heart.....not really bumped into my angel yet...may be when i do,the words i write then will be more beautiful...thanks 4 reading of my happy-happy poems..its meant to make ppl smile...gald u liked it..thank a lot..

    @martina....proud to ba a cancerian.....thanks..
    TaKe LiFe As It CoMes....

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    very well said man....actually these comparisions ..metaphor's...or wahtever u may call it.. r really really good....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Har***
    To an Angel


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    ^^lol...nope..that wasnt 4 you...

    @madhuresh...thank you..
    TaKe LiFe As It CoMes....



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