there was once a brilliant dream
and fears ignored while i sleep
i hit pause to wake, till its time again
to cross one more off my list
you've forgotten now
what you wanted
or why you ever
crawled out of bed
i hate it now because it makes me remember
you shouldnt have taken that from me
please dont make me wait
and still have to stay awake
written because im bored, pissed, really missing a cigarette, and its only fair that i get critiqued as well.
if someone were to get me a bar of chocolate and a pack of smokes, id be much obliged.
my own opinion of this is quite low, i find it too discontinuous.