Ab roko na

I wrote this song a long time back, and recorded it with my friends, dunno why I never posted it. So here it is, quite simple.

Ab roko na

Teri yaadon se nikalne ki bas tamanna thi
kore kagaz pe likhi wo tarkib mil gayi
guzre lamho ko fir jeene se kya fayda
Teri khushboo mein teri hi tasveer mil gayi


Na roko mujhe,
ab jane do.
Meri ankhon se dhool,
mitane do..
Na roko mujhe,
...ke teri aas,
mein guzri baaton,
Se badhti hai pyaas.
Na roko mujhe
ab jaane do.
Meri zameen,
basane do.


Ab aaye to fir laut aunga mai,
Tujhko baahon mein yoon basa lunga mai.
Fir chhute na kabhi pyaar ke pal,
Apni aankhon me tumko chupa lunga main.


Fir teri yaad sataye mujhe,
muskurake wo tadpaye mujhe.
Dobara nahi ayenge kabhi,
door se hi d!khaye mujhe.


Ik pal ki aas, teri yaad.
bulaye paas, teri yaad.


Na roko mujhe
(Na roko mujhe)
Chale jao
door se hi gungunao tum.


Na roko mujhe x2
Na roko mujhex2

Where is the recording? Nice lines by the way..

Yes..I'd posted the recording long back on soundclick...
But refrained from posting here because it is not good quality, and back then I did not know of noise reduction or reverb, equalization. Its just plain recording on a headphone mic.
I'm still posting the link in the soundtrack forum...
Ab roko na

Okay .. will check it later...

i liked it! wil lsay more after listening to the song..

good lines...and the music is good too...

@metalhead_junky, allstarsband
thanks dudes!
I'm onto some more songs these days...hope they turn out good

hey....horsemouth....this is some great stuff...great dude....kafi accha likha hai..

thanks dude! which means good that I shared it