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  1. #1
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    Smile Ab Kya Likhun......

    Likhne ko ek kalam to hai, par roshnai saath nahi deti,
    Jazbaat utaarne hain kagaz pe,par soch saath nahi deti.


    Armaan bhare is dil mein they basaaye bahut se ashiyaane
    Ek nanha sa sapna tha sanjoya ab usi ko chale hain dafnaane.


    Zindagi se jyada to nahi bas ek apne ka manga tha saath,
    Kismat hai ki woh hai saath phir bhi chooth gaya uska haath.


    Mujhe koi bhi maat de de,yeh kabhi bhi kiya manjoor nahi,
    Tu mera to hai ,par mere saath nahi ismein tera kasoor nahi.

    Kismat ko apni badalte badalte khud hi badal gaya hoon main,
    Unchai panne ki chaahat mein, tum se bichad gaya hoon main.


    Ab to mujhe sirf teri yaadon ke sahare jeena hi padega,
    Chaak jigar hai gham se tere, phir ise seena hi padega.


    Jaate hain sabhi khaali hath ,main bhi akela hi jaunga ,
    Afsos yahi ki main to apna pyaar bhi chodh kar jaonga.


    Farishte jab karenge hisaab, meri to hogi khaali kitaab,
    Naam tera likhna chahunga main,jaise ho aakhri fariyaad.

    Aur kaya likho tere liye ki alfaaz bhi ab rote hai zaar zaar,
    Kuch bhi nahi baccha hai, tu le jaa meri duaein hazaar.
    ANUM *****Do Good, Be Good and Feel good******

    & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ &

    When I do good, I feel good; when I do bad, I feel bad, and that is my religion.

    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    WHATEVER YOU ARE, BE A GOOD ONE.

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    wow... thts really really gud...
    Jeeta Hai ye bhanda marne keliye ek din,
    Jeeta Hai ye bhanda marne keliye ek din,
    Magar yeh soch ke nahin marta, ke jeeta bhi hai koi uskeliye har din.

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    thanx....i have been away for a while....so cud not post any gud work here.....though i realise only one of us really bother to post a comment....!!!

    Amazing.....ab lagta hai yahan pe apni poems post karna theek nahi....sab ko apne post ka khyal rehta .....no one cares for each other....well it's upsetting...Soory to say...may be rude but true...!!
    ANUM *****Do Good, Be Good and Feel good******

    & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ &

    When I do good, I feel good; when I do bad, I feel bad, and that is my religion.

    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    WHATEVER YOU ARE, BE A GOOD ONE.

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    nice poem anum
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    Achcha likha.. nice work anum..

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    Thanx a lot to jazzbox & bish ( i just can acknowledge ur comments with ur alias...dunno ur real names).......i appreciate it....

    Well...the whole idea of posting poems fails here if the readers (not all...may be some) do not post their comment. If the writer doesn't come to know his/her flaws or positive points.I take feedback positively...coz that tells u where u can improve...

    Guys no one's perfect...we need to keep optimism within to let soul and mind grow...!!!

    Keep writing and smiling!!!
    ANUM *****Do Good, Be Good and Feel good******

    & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ & @ &

    When I do good, I feel good; when I do bad, I feel bad, and that is my religion.

    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    WHATEVER YOU ARE, BE A GOOD ONE.

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    it was long and nothing new !

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    most of our week points make us more stronger ..

    well i m zubair
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