come what may..it does
i like the theme
nice flow and jus the right length..
what i perceive
coincidently "life" or "it" can be replaced with a person aswell
in the poem instead of "you" it can also be "i"..and still make sense!
Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
Where life and its ventures are laid,
The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
May see us in sunshine or shade;
Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
We'll trim our broad sail as before,
And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
Nor ask how we look from the shore!
Oliver Wendell Holmes