make a song dude
make a song!
put it to some music
and its song material..
if its a crow that u sing like..so be it!
last two lines of first para give me a feeling of incompleteness..
And we know
that the shadow of the past still lingers on
that sometimes we lose our way in the fantasy ride
and we still try to count
how many dreams you and I lost
in those sleepless nights
Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
Where life and its ventures are laid,
The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
May see us in sunshine or shade;
Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
We'll trim our broad sail as before,
And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
Nor ask how we look from the shore!
Oliver Wendell Holmes