I loved your poem..
its simple and put forward beautifully
do as Sarat says,
my bro doesnt say that to people very often
one line which i've loved the most is
"'cause the color of the rainbow doesnt excite us anymore"
and the rest is good too
Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
Where life and its ventures are laid,
The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
May see us in sunshine or shade;
Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
We'll trim our broad sail as before,
And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
Nor ask how we look from the shore!
Oliver Wendell Holmes