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    Quote Originally Posted by BubblyMartini
    only difference in both the poems would be the incense

    in my poem
    Everything was fine
    But the incense was missing
    She hated that the most

    wheras in esgallindeion's take it reads
    But now look at her
    Walled forever
    In her permanent home
    With incense all around
    Yet not bothering her.

    jus wanted to explain a teeny yet not tiny difference besides the corrections..
    kinda like the second version better

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    -Other side of the Horizon- you wouldnt wanna be there..
    Thanks Hira and Arpi..

    Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
    Where life and its ventures are laid,
    The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
    May see us in sunshine or shade;
    Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
    We'll trim our broad sail as before,
    And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
    Nor ask how we look from the shore!

    Oliver Wendell Holmes




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