Ahhhh finally gave writing a shot huh?Good!
Firstly,I understood it!Considering my poor abilities at interpreting,I'm glad this one made sense to me!Ok so the theme is deep...nice work there.The depiction is fairly expressive.What I really liked was the fact that most of the poem is what meets the eye but then there are just some lines that go beyond and tell many things..like :
'Your voiceless stare only provokes the thought
a million years could’ve brought.'
Song,I don't know..but a mildly grotesque yet appealing write..something vaguely romantic and yet dark...
Keep writing I must say!
"I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."
"So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
And only God knows why..."
Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock