Video of one of the originals that i am workin on currently...

**mymusicmyguitar** · 01-21-2012, 08:29 AM

Here is a video of how my original will sound. This original is still NOT complete. I still hav to work on chord progression, tone and riffs and arrange it properly. But here are a few main riffs.

2012 01 20 009 - YouTube

Will post the final version of it once i am done!!!

Gear used : Fender, Roland, phone for recording

**Morbid_Angel** · 01-21-2012, 08:41 AM

are you sure that's the tone you're going to use? you play it more like a metal riff and it sounds really bad on the tone you've chosen. also, it all sounds very jumbled up with unnatural transitions but maybe that's just coz it's incomplete.
however, the ideas are good and i hope you piece them together well to create something better than what it seems it is now :] spend more time on thinking up transitions than trying to play impressive parts ^^

**mymusicmyguitar** · 01-21-2012, 08:53 AM

Originally Posted by Morbid_Angel

are you sure that's the tone you're going to use? you play it more like a metal riff and it sounds really bad on the tone you've chosen. also, it all sounds very jumbled up with unnatural transitions but maybe that's just coz it's incomplete.
however, the ideas are good and i hope you piece them together well to create something better than what it seems it is now :] spend more time on thinking up transitions than trying to play impressive parts ^^

The video was actually a desperate attempt to capture the riffs that came to me while playing. The tapping wasnt a part of it earlier neither the riff after that. It was just something that i started with. And YES its NOT goin on with the flow. Those are Justs riffs...

Yeah tone and transition is something that u will get to listen in my next video once i arrange it properly....Thx for watchin buddy

**Super-Admin** · 01-23-2012, 07:43 PM

Hate the quality of the video, but I LIKE what's cooking !

Bring it on ! Let's help you get some eyeballs rolling on it

**mymusicmyguitar** · 01-24-2012, 01:52 PM

Originally Posted by Super-Admin

Hate the quality of the video, but I LIKE what's cooking !

Bring it on ! Let's help you get some eyeballs rolling on it

Lol. Thanks for watchin!!!..my scarlett Interface is coming in 5 days... I hope the audio recording quality increases after that...Dont know about video...Will check if my cam has better recording on it.

Will post the revised video before end of this week.

**bjr** · 01-24-2012, 02:08 PM

I didn't like it at all. It just didn't sound nice. The intervals sort of hurt my ear and I agree with zicky when he says that the tone should be harsher than it is. Maybe it'll sound better when you finish it and put it together. Either way, I'm probably not your target audience.

**mymusicmyguitar** · 01-24-2012, 03:16 PM

Originally Posted by bjr

I didn't like it at all. It just didn't sound nice. The intervals sort of hurt my ear and I agree with zicky when he says that the tone should be harsher than it is. Maybe it'll sound better when you finish it and put it together. Either way, I'm probably not your target audience.

Yeah...completely agree with u. but its not a song as of now. Those are just riffs and ideas to create something out of it. Hopefully i will make sumthin that will please ur ears...
thanks for ur comments and thanks for watching .

Do check out another original comp over here
Please do comment on this one as well.
Another Original of mine which was recorded few months back