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    Nirvanafreak is offline Official Freak
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    Can someone give me feedback on my lyrics and poems?

    Just check out which threads I've made...I've posted some new ones,too...
    And if you save yourself,
    You will make Him happy...
    He'll keep you in a jar,
    And you'll think you're happy..
    He'll give you breather holes,
    And you'll think you're happy...
    He'll cover you with grass,
    And you'll think you're happy...

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    ok dude



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