Another Original of mine which was recorded few months back

**mymusicmyguitar** · 01-21-2012, 09:21 AM

Its called Wave Of Transience. No video only MP3.

http://soundcloud.com/mymusicmyguita...-of-transience

Gear used - Ibanez S540, Marshall 10cd, Delay pedal, Computer Microphone..

**thehundredthone** · 01-21-2012, 11:40 AM

There's nothing there.

**mymusicmyguitar** · 01-21-2012, 01:11 PM

When i click on the link, i am able to see it and play it as well. Why isnt it working for u ? Is there any setting in that. I wil check..

**mymusicmyguitar** · 01-21-2012, 01:14 PM

The track was set as Private. Now made public....U can listen to it now. Let me know if you still face problem with accessing that file..

**Sumanovo razor** · 01-21-2012, 01:56 PM

who played the drums

**thehundredthone** · 01-21-2012, 02:13 PM

Can't commend on the recording or tone since I'm guessing it's a phone recording. The song itself was simple, nothing wrong with that, but could do with slightly better structuring.

**mymusicmyguitar** · 01-22-2012, 09:30 PM

recordin was done on audacity and a pc mike.drums played by my friend.
Most of the parts in this OC were just random on the spot. never actually structured it nor improvised coz there wasnt any particular chord progression that i followed. But yes there is lot of room for changes in this one ...Will try and do some better structuring in the next OCs..

thanks for watching. Will post more videos soon.

**bjr** · 01-24-2012, 05:01 PM

I think you should add another melody on top of this. Right now, it sounds okay but it's a little empty...in my head, I'd put your guitar line on the bass instead and it'd sound like a backing track for an Eric Johnson song on which you'd play a sweet melody.

**mymusicmyguitar** · 01-24-2012, 05:07 PM

Originally Posted by bjr

I think you should add another melody on top of this. Right now, it sounds okay but it's a little empty...in my head, I'd put your guitar line on the bass instead and it'd sound like a backing track for an Eric Johnson song on which you'd play a sweet melody.

Yeah sounds good....Thx....Will experiment with it soon...

**harmonizer** · 01-26-2012, 02:35 AM

please add a bass line.....without bass a melody feels naked to me

**wylder** · 01-26-2012, 03:33 AM

Nice track... As suggested, work on a melody line over it.

And ensure your guitars are in tune before recording.

**Keoraf** · 01-31-2012, 02:20 PM

Originally Posted by bjr

I think you should add another melody on top of this. Right now, it sounds okay but it's a little empty...in my head, I'd put your guitar line on the bass instead and it'd sound like a backing track for an Eric Johnson song on which you'd play a sweet melody.

I totally agree with BJR, just put a melody line on top of this and try to change some of the guitar picking with a strumming pattern. And add some basses too.
A little suggestion from my side aswell, change the drum pattern (1:40-2:30) into the same pattern as in the beginning.
It isn't a bad idea to have more drum patterns in one song, but the different patterns have to be fit in the track and in my opinion this isn't happening.
Take care man!